Tuesday, 19 May 2015

Foul shot

With only a few more seconds left on the clock
The scoreboard with only a few
She was just standing there
As a part of our writing we had to read Foul shot and then make our own poem built around Foul shot. We also had to make sure that each line was a new idea at that we used strong action verbs and two stanzas.

Aiming her body  
Positioned in a place
So the ball could be smacked into the goal  

As the ball comes swinging in
It scrapes the ground
Comes to a stop
Flinging of
In a different direction
Just nicks the ground
And then
                            And then
                                                          And then
Out of the blue
The ball
Into the goal
With one kick
Through and in

Game over

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